RJA #10

Thesis Question
Is the Mozart Effect real?

Precise Claim
the Mozart Effect can make people smarter

Reasons/Blueprints:
1.the audiences of classical music.
2.the melody of the music can bring a sense of comfort to people
3.lots of experiment proved that the Mozart Effect exists.

Thesis Statement
The Mozart Effect works on everybody everywhere.

Argument
Reason A: People who like classical music usually very successful.
Evidence A1: people who like classical music always behave properly
Evidence A2: classical music is set as the required classes to grand tour
Evidence A3: provide several examples to support that

Reason B: Lots of people try to calm down themselves by listening to music
Evidence B1: lots of people sleep while listening to music
Evidence B2: experiment shows that given a certain piece of music (largo) can make people sleepy.
Evidence B3: usually after working, people want to listen to music to relax themselves.

Reason C: Mozart's works connect with our nerve
Evidence C1: experiment shows that after listening to the Mozart, people's spatial ability got improved.
Evidence C2: Mozart's works' peak related to our nerve peak.
Evidence C3: Mozart's work usually optimistic

Objection  A: people's success cannot directly related to the Mozart Effect

Objection C: so many facts can change the result of experiment
Refutation C: all things are for the business